Ya might have to forgive me for this, but I’m venturing again into the arena of tanka. I like the simplicity, so here is my second one:
Feast, gorge, devour, more … devine sweet … but in my blood, parched, despair,
advice, new meds, cravings lift, life shift,
Gorgeous science feast for all.
More explanation later. < – – – – that’s NOT part of the tanka : )
I’ve never looked at that form. Thank you for the intro!
Very cool!! 🙂🌟💛
I think you are actually a genius at this form of poetry – not kidding. This is amazing.