tanka two

Ya might have to forgive me for this, but I’m venturing again into the arena of tanka.  I like the simplicity, so here is my second one:

Feast, gorge, devour, more … devine sweet … but in my blood, parched, despair,
advice, new meds, cravings lift, life shift,
Gorgeous science feast for all.

 

More explanation later.  < – – – – that’s NOT part of the tanka : )

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